Flower Power 8 Replies . Forget me not sighs of summer wine and your lies blue blooms of your eyes. . Prompt FORGET ME NOT from Haiku Heights. . About these ads Rate this:Like this:Like Loading...
Leo August 1, 2012 at 5:09 pm Somehow it reminded me of a child’s misplaced trust in a pair of endearing blue eyes.. Leo Reply ↓
tigerbrite Post authorAugust 2, 2012 at 10:59 pm Yes, I can see that although it was not what I was aware of writing. Funny thing the muse- Reply ↓
4joy July 30, 2012 at 2:49 pm The image is a bit unpleasant, but your words are so very lovely – and I always love a good rhyme…. Reply ↓
ManicDdaily July 30, 2012 at 3:14 am Great sounds here – the rhymes work well – and clever poem. k. Reply ↓
Grace July 29, 2012 at 10:16 pm I like the summer wine and lies ~ And that image is surreal ~ Great take ~ Reply ↓
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Hmmm..I like forget me not sighs..
Somehow it reminded me of a child’s misplaced trust in a pair of endearing blue eyes..
Leo
Yes, I can see that although it was not what I was aware of writing. Funny thing the muse-
The image is a bit unpleasant, but your words are so very lovely – and I always love a good rhyme….
love the rhymes too.
but it’s the piece that’s wondrous
Great sounds here – the rhymes work well – and clever poem. k.
I like the summer wine and lies ~ And that image is surreal ~ Great take ~
Lovely words, and the image complements them too